Sunday, June 12, 2011

Days Gone By Comments

Rating: 5.0

My footsteps echo as I walk into barren rooms of days gone by
Rooms that I’m seldom able to enter without a long, sad sigh.
These rooms share countless stories, now mere wisps in the air
Whispered words from dark corners drifting from here to there.
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Diane Caudle
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 12 June 2011

Nice poem. Full of great sentiments. The poem is rich in imagery and style. Great write indeed. I give it 10/10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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