Dear Girls Comments

Thanks for sharing your thoughts, view, concept and heart with us. I enjoyed the read and grasped it well for it was like reading my own life's testimony to my children, of the mistakes I had made in life and the behaviours I subjected them to. Like you I had to learn to love myself, but before I could even do that, I first had to learn what love was. Now I have a totally different outlook on life and my chilren, all grown with children of their own, are the most blessed gifts God in heaven could have given me. Hope you don't mind, but found a couple of errors that a bit of tweaking to, would help: 6th line reads, '...be alone. Some one to hold...' Some one' should be 'someone', as you have through your work anyway, except here. It would also help if you placed a few commas where you continue from one point to the next: e.g. someone to hold, someone to..., In the section dedicated to Karina,2nd line, you have...'I was to concerned...' instead of 'I was too concerned...' Apart from those minor things, I enjoyed what you shared for it touched the heart of past memories and the reflections that came well refreshed me. Many blessings to you