Dear Juliet, beware the snore,
the farts staining the underwear thrown on the sideboard,
the flowers not given, the 7th child, the daily bread...
surely they can kill more surely than the knife, the feudal hatred.
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a very original and unusual composition. But does not read like a poem.
Something is either original or not, no adverb like 'very' is needed. Poems do not have to rhyme; there are many different styles of poems.