Monday, October 16, 2017

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These windows were open for long time
To hear the murmur of an unknown gust
To be in the hands of its long wings
A travel to the myths of universal truth
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SALINI NAIR
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Saji G Praleyagiri 17 October 2017

Dear poetess, a beautiful poem describe reality as I enshrined in the poem 'Farewell Journey'.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 October 2017

Now the breathe is the rhythm of nature Formed and nurtured within its heart A breeze pass that side with its fervour soul started its voyage to universal soul.. .. loved these lines. Body is mortal but soul is immortal. After death soul leaves the body and goes for next birth as per his karma. It is a beautiful poem on death having nice penmanship. Many thanks dear Salini for sharing this poem with us.

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