poet Hasmukh Amathalal

Hasmukh Amathalal

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Death

Death is reality if not caused
Life is gone and paused
Heart is in grief and gripped with fear
Loose interest in life and pain you bear

Death is God’s creation
Must Gob back to Him after cremation?
No one must try to deprive a person
Of his life even if has a reason

Death is punishable crime with penalty
It is very rude form of cruelty
We are not here to take away life
It may be curse to somebody’s mother or wife

Gangster’s may consider and take it as game
They may murder it for getting cheap fame
Murderers may try to have their way
Simple hegemony to rule and have sway

Illiteracy and ignorance may create the scene
Poor and helpless may indulge and mostly seen
For paltry sum somebody may loose the soul
Temptation for money…………………..

Death should not be rewarded with death
Person should be condemned and invite wrath
Slain man should be offered respectful wreath
Convict should be given enough chance to live with

“Rarest of rare” is the term for punishment
Exemplary punishment is the answer to comment
“Live and let others live” should only be the slogan
No problem can be solved at the point of gun

Let death remain at the discretion of Lord
We have to just obey and follow his word
He may shorten the life or bless it with shower
We respect the dead with honour and flower

Life is to live full and not depart
It has to be utilized and not divided in part
Must be honoured and praised as best opportunity
Let us pray together with one voice as unity

Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 15, 2009
Poem Edited: Friday, May 27, 2011

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  • g black black (12/2/2009 6:25:00 PM)

    ONE WORD
    AMAZING
    I LOVE THIS POEMS IT SO GOOD I ESPECIALLY LOVE THE WAY THAT YOU TRIED TO RHYME WORD IT WAS AMAZING

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  • george george (11/29/2009 6:51:00 PM)

    'Life is to live full and not depart
    It has to be utilized and not divided in part'

    I love these lines! Very nice poem, thank-you.

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  • Catrina Heart (11/24/2009 3:14:00 AM)

    Death is an angel to bring another life..........Great poem shared!

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  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (11/19/2009 1:09:00 PM)

    ‘…Simple hegemony to rule and have sway…’

    Sir may I add idiotic political hegemony is the root cause of everything.
    Ten++
    niv

    Please read mine Past.

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  • rago rago (11/17/2009 5:26:00 AM)

    very thought provoking and poem on death carries meaningful in presence..........

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  • Jayant Manik (11/16/2009 8:10:00 PM)

    Death is reality if not caused
    Life is gone and paused

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  • Vinod Karmakar (11/16/2009 8:04:00 PM)

    Death is God’s creation
    Must Gob back to Him after cremation

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  • Dalsukh S (11/16/2009 7:57:00 PM)

    No one must try to deprive a person
    Of his life even if has a reason

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  • Trevor William (11/16/2009 7:49:00 PM)

    No one must try to deprive a person
    Of his life even if has a reason

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  • Bhanubhai Montu Shah (11/16/2009 7:48:00 PM)

    Death is punishable crime with penalty
    It is very rude form of cruelty

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  • Pradip Pillai (11/16/2009 7:42:00 PM)

    Death is reality if not caused
    Life is gone and paused

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  • Ritul Soni (11/16/2009 4:51:00 AM)

    Death is punishable crime with penalty
    It is very rude form of cruelty
    We are not here to take away life
    It may be curse to somebody’s mother or wife

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  • Pittle Shaileja (11/16/2009 4:36:00 AM)

    Death is reality if not caused
    Life is gone and paused

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  • Anju Addanki (11/15/2009 11:58:00 AM)

    Just loved the full poem

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  • Chand Shikari (11/15/2009 11:39:00 AM)

    Death is reality if not caused
    Life is gone and paused
    Heart is in grief and gripped with fear
    Loose interest in life and pain you bear

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  • Jigar Mehta (11/15/2009 11:09:00 AM)

    Death is God’s creation
    Must Gob back to Him after cremation?

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  • Sejal Kapadia (11/15/2009 8:08:00 AM)

    Gangster’s may consider and take it as game
    They may murder it for getting cheap fame

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  • Bharati Bhikhubhai (11/15/2009 7:59:00 AM)

    Death is God’s creation
    Must Gob back to Him after cremation?

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  • Kamlesh Ambalal (11/15/2009 7:48:00 AM)

    Death is reality if not caused
    Life is gone and paused....lovley poem..10

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  • Catrina Heart (11/15/2009 6:40:00 AM)

    Life is to live full and not depart
    It has to be utilized and not divided in part
    Must be honoured and praised as best opportunity
    Let us pray together with one voice as unity
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    life to live to the fullest so happiness brings ground of a verdant meadow across horizon....JOin hands and be in one voice for unity and peace......great poem indeed! ! !

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