Death Poem by Oscar Lopez

Death

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One day that time will come
That time when someone you love will die
You will feel down & depressed.
You can try to not cry
But most likely you will fail
So be prepared for it
For death cannot be avoided
You will have a sad facial expression
Full of depression.
But don't be so surprised
For it will happen
That day will be filled with cries
But you might see them in the afterlife.
So just save the depression
And learn the lesson
That you might see them in another session.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Oscar Lopez 20 June 2013

thanks, this was for homework and i was seeing if it was any good

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Sj Holland 20 June 2013

Very nice. It's a good reminder for those who have faith, because that faith can fail in difficult times, if we're not prepared to hold on to it. I like your odd and occasional rhyming lines.

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