Friday, June 12, 2015
Death's Own Carnival Comments
Rating: ★3.5
I lay, astray-ed by the winds of despair,
My aching soul weeps, but I don’t care,
I open my eyes to visualize those walls,
That mock my being as I start to crawl...
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3/15/2026 6:34:21 AM # 1.0.0
A bold attempt at overcoming depression well depicted in the poem. Bringing forces of the mind to bear in a deplorable and low ebb situation is indeed a very commendable and courageous step towards overcoming a bad situation. A lovely poem, well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
Dear Chinedu Dike, thank you so much for your lovely comment and review of my poem. This was my first poem to be published here in Poem Hunter and this review of yours simply make my day. It'll inspire me to write better and more. Thanks so much.