Deaths Door Poem by Keith Foley

Deaths Door

Rating: 4.5


God, no, no, no, tell me it ain't so!
Say it's not true, my heart you pulled in two.

Awake me from this awful dream, heads bursting, need to scream!
She's my sweet and precious girl, my stomach needs to hurl.

Impossible to accept this mortal fact, 'cause she & I made a pact;
She would fear no other and I will protect her, like a brother.

This awful truth impales my broken heart, I can't go on, with us apart.

What about the ones left behind, should I release myself from my mind?
OH, this choice, not fair to make, she was so young for you to take.

Sorry, death moved too fast, I could not protect you at the last.

But, the pacts been said, a promise made, I now will follow to your grave!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cecil Hickman 14 August 2008

an emotional write your words describe the pain and discomfort unfortunately things happen and we do not know or understand why, , someday we will know and until that time know that we all feel the pain and heartbreak, , as well others may know similarly of your loss, , blessings..Cecil

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Javier Falcon 10 August 2008

Well written, strong emotions which really help pull out your message... Good write...

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Tanya Stanford 07 August 2008

Yet another one written with such emotion. Beautiful!

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