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The owner of my bar died
his widow opened windows wide
and life flooded in; sun light
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Jan Oskar Hansen
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Upendra Upm 10 August 2017

Following and connecting the two events viz.bar owner dying and his widow opening the windows wide open is the work of profoundly spiritual mind that has worked with utmost due diligence.Again his brandy glass paled in too much of sunlight, is a very meticulous perception.

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Upendra Upm 10 August 2017

following an echo of the dream once they had.., the poem is replete with matured reflections from beginning to end.

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