Deep Love Disguised. Poem by Emily Reid

Deep Love Disguised.



Shining eyes and stolen glances
small clues to your sacred secret
Missed opening lead to lost chances
Memories you haven't built yet

Every ounce of joy coupled with sadness
Each of your smiles stunted and caged
Your deep love disguised with emptiness
To hide scars from this war you've waged

I sit back and marvel at what I can observe
Proud of your determination, your strength
I hope and pray from this course you'll not swerve,
Continue running this race through its full length.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sabrina Rice 30 September 2009

Beautiful. Well written, I like tho flow and rythem. There is a realness and beautiful sad and encouraging ora throughout. I can definatly relate to the hopes you express within the piece. Keep writing :)

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