Wednesday, September 30, 2009

Deep Love Disguised. Comments

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Shining eyes and stolen glances
small clues to your sacred secret
Missed opening lead to lost chances
Memories you haven't built yet
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Emily Reid
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Sabrina Rice 30 September 2009

Beautiful. Well written, I like tho flow and rythem. There is a realness and beautiful sad and encouraging ora throughout. I can definatly relate to the hopes you express within the piece. Keep writing :)

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Emily Reid

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