Deletions In A Notebook Poem by Robert Gilchrist

Deletions In A Notebook



A small brown notebook,
Dripping with expectation and adventure,
For this Boy Seaman,16 years of age,
Barely old enough to shave,
Let alone serve his country,
In a theater of war.

But there it is,
Names of new friends, buddies and mates,
With addresses in anticipation,
Of an heroic homecoming,
Comparing notes,
Experiences and histories.

But all too soon,
Lines appear through names - ruled with precision,
As the grand adventure reality sets in,
And the boy's youth is stolen,
With the screams of Stukas and sailors alike,
Never to be returned to him.

Monday, February 12, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: adventure,death of a friend,friends,friendship,innocence,navy,sailor,service,war,warfare
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My father was a boy seaman when war broke out and he found himself, underage aboard a frigate in the Mediterranean under attack.
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Robert Gilchrist

Robert Gilchrist

Dunedin, New Zealand
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