Thursday, April 27, 2017

Departed Hope Comments

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She left for heavenly abode
She left to never come back

When you fool her around
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Divya Garg
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Dr Antony Theodore 27 April 2017

Lost herself in this worldly strand Shaken faith, scattered hope Killed inside, the burning hop On her own feet, Strong willed hope Gave her one more chance. ypur poems end always with a hope that is beautiful dear. thank you for the nice description and the words u use.. thank you. tony

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Divya Garg 28 April 2017

Thank you so much for the encouraging words, am really glad you liked it, This will certainly push me to write more :)

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Siddartha Montik 27 April 2017

Nicely Written.. well expressed thoughts.. Thank you for sharing! 10++

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Divya Garg 28 April 2017

Thank you so much Siddartha :)

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Divya Garg 28 April 2017

Thank you so much Siddartha :) glad you liked it.

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