i can't stop wondering why
i sit still and cry
hoping everyday
i change my destructive way
preventing others in
but yet commiting my on sin
thinking everthing is immoral
because i am drowned in sorrow
no one knows the tears i shed
while lying in my bed
every night i prey
to feel better the next day
but never stopping to think
maybe this is my way
Yes gurl I feel ya! ! I have felt this way and no this is not our way!
This one right here express every-thhhhhhhhingsss. on the real tho. Keep writing poems and keep posting them on here, and let everyone know that they are not lone about how they feel, but also keep doing this for you and only you.
Wow this is great, its a great way to expression your inner feelings.also, its funny because at times i feel the same way.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
using poetry as a form of therapy is great.. you write your emotions for the world to see. if you ever want help on the structure or thyming of a poem or poems - let me know. writing the way you feel makes for a great poem, but by adding stanza's or rhyme to it and have it not to be forced - makes YOU are great poet. peace lynn