Wednesday, November 23, 2011

Desert Spring Comments

Rating: 5.0

The hills filled with fight and fear
Days are lost in rudimentary cheer
One could’ve a million sensitivities
But only if there were green on trees
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Subhash Misra
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Dr Antony Theodore 13 May 2016

Barren land without fertile thought Direction or any perspective clue But the spring comes to the desert too.... a symbol of a mind which is barren..... but the poem ends in hope. the spring comes to the desert also...... so you hve ended the poem with a beautiful point of hope... love this poem. tony

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