Saturday, August 27, 2016

Destined To Rise Comments

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When the Drunken shadows echo my demise
I shall rise

When the clouds of doubt darkens my rainbow
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nidal habash
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Howard Savage 20 September 2016

Great poem with a strong and profound sense of emotions. Great write, short but to the point.

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Raiven Moore 27 August 2016

As all of us should in our own way..rise and be the person we are.. whether is is observed as positive or negative to others it is how it makes us feel that is important.. a strong personal piece with echoes of your personal determination

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