devious silence,
i wish to know you.
hold me firmly in your arms
and make the pain retreat.
a discontinuation, lacking anticipation.
my implicit promise falls
and i am at my final rest.
2. Cliched. Lines 2-4, in particular, have been repeated almost verbatim in countless poems, pop lyrics, etc. A subject as thoroughly written about as love needs to be treated with 100% originality and striking detail. This isn't it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Perfect just the way it is, great job!