Sunday, June 18, 2006

Did I Ever Tell You? Comments

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Did I ever tell you?
That every time you laugh with me,
Warm, invisible fluid fingers
caress and tickle me?
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Hale Tsehlana
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Lawrence Beck 18 June 2006

Hale, I have picked this poem for a comment, but I have read four of yours today, and each is very good. Each has an interesting theme and excellent images. Each flows beautifully. I'm happy to have found them. Larry Beck

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