Direction Of Thought Poem by Jasmin Dalton

Direction Of Thought

Rating: 4.8


our thoughts
constantly
trail off
into branches
full of leaves

that are falling

and floating

in different directions
Creating new pathways
without proper sequence.


Reminiscence
or Creation
Existence
and contemplation

Lost in their land
of
Illusion

Thursday, May 15, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: thought
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Dictionary definition of 'Illusion'

: a perception that represents what is perceived in a way different from the way it is in reality.

Enjoy.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Weldon Davis 26 January 2016

I like your poem...The way you use the tree and leaves as symbolism for thought...quite apt and brilliant...Cheers

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 21 May 2014

Hello poet Jasmin. I know I read this before, but my comments were deleted. Anyway, this was great, I enjoyed, Loyd

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 15 May 2014

Hello poet Jasmin. I enjoyed your poem and it was well written. Come and visit my work when you can. Loyd

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