Tuesday, February 1, 2011

Distance Is The Enemy Comments

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The phone clicks, the line goes dead
And doubt fills my head
An endless love, what is this?
When you don't reply to calls you miss
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Pari Dharawat 06 November 2011

I liked the poem. It has justified the tense feeling so well! has the love really outgrown? the phone rings or not, do they remember us or not, the anxiousness is so real, you made it so clear in your poem :) Keep writing

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