Do You Remember Poem by Lynn Marie

Do You Remember



do you remember
our first date
i do
you had me out so late

do you remember
our first kiss
i do
its the one ill always miss

do you remember
our first song
i do
we danced to long

do you rembember
our first holiday
i do
i its where i id love to stay

do you remember
our first fight
i do
it last all night

do you remember
our last goodbye
i do
it still makes me cry

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Blevins 28 September 2009

this was a good poem......until the ending....which made it great! very emotional and real, great job! ~

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Miranda Van Yperen 27 August 2009

aaaww oh my god.... that is a really REALLY wonderful, beautiful, amazing poem i have ever read! ! ! great job.... no one could say that your poem wasn't from your heart.. because it so was! ! i love it, thanks so much for sharing :)

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Shekhar Joshi 22 June 2009

ahhhh i never anticipated a sad ending........it was looking such a passionate and sweet poem....... excellent poem........ ;) ....

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