Dodged A Bullet Comments

i plan to put poem into Feb. showcase today. Thanks! bri :)

I didn't dodge a bullet I stepped right in its path stared it in the face and waited for the aftermath ...............these are great lines! ! ! (to be continued) .................

I lay awake at night..............i'm liking the poem a lot, but try lie awake, not lay awake. a common mistake; the verbs lay and lie can be confusing and i think have been for me in the past. (to be continued) ................