Dont Be With A Player Poem by victoria parks

Dont Be With A Player



you love someone you go for it and try to be with them then they cheat on you but you say oh i dont care i love them but it turnsout they do it again and again and the same thing always happens you say you love them and they say they love you back and they say it will never happen again but there just playing you and your blinded by the fact that you think you love them and you think they love you but your wrong they are just going to use you till there done then throw you on to the side of the road like trash but your best bet is to forget about them and find someone better who will treat you right

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shekhar Joshi 09 September 2009

you have spoken the truth...i agree with it.......but not in a very presentable way.....not kind of seems like poem...but more like a prose...... all u have to do is to find a better way to present what you have to say.......and i think u say good...... best o luck......

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