Thursday, July 5, 2007

Doors Of Emerald City Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was asleep...sometime before dawn,
Then woke awfully cold...
Remembering dreaming...
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Alison Cassidy 09 July 2007

Your Wizard of Oz reference in the title is brilliant. A wonderful door into your dreaming. Ironically I too dreamed of my mother this morning and still feel its echoes as I read this. You have certainly captured the surrealist tension of the dream state and your deeply layered poem is rich with intrigue and drama. Love your facility with dialect too. love, Allie xxxx

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Sandra Fowler 09 July 2007

Very powerful and evocative. You are indeed a poet worthy of the name. As always, Sandra

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Thibodaux. Louisiana
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