Monday, August 1, 2016

Dreading Death Comments

Rating: 5.0

At every gust the dead leaves fall
From the asleep tree clinging to the wall
The falling tears from it in the form of drips of rain
Obsessed with agony and pain
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Aman Hussain
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Chukwuebuka Adebayo 01 August 2016

The Lines Are touching anyway but be basic when writing.Good Job.keep writing!

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i hope you all will like and understand my emotions conveyed through the poem

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