Dream Comments

This poem captures the thoughts that every writer/poet has had at some time, well done. I especially like the bit at the end though, “It seems like a distant memory to me now. Like a cousin you played with as a child, That you now pass with a nod in the grocery store.” Wow! Yes we lose touch far too easily with those who we once were so close too... Regards, Seán

I like this a lot too. How many of us have had this brilliant thought, dream etc. and lost it within a split second. I often wish I had a photographic memory that I could rewind and play back. I do also agree with Adam on the first couple of stanza's though. Kind regards Gypsy