Dream Poem by brittany gurl

Dream



i love you you love me back
i kiss you you kiss me back
i tell you a secret you tell me another
i want to see you you want to see me
ill be with you youll be with me
when we say we love eachother
and want to spend the rest of our lifes together
we mean it!

{5/12/06}
brittany

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sam Finley 22 May 2006

wow that's good nice job indeed kind of...sweet don't get me wrong just that it might have more of an effect on a girl though its sweet one of your best i've read! !

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Michelle Serrano 13 May 2006

It's cute i like it! ! ! ! ! ! !

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qwe rty 13 May 2006

soundslike a fairy tale good read

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