Saturday, March 10, 2012

Dreaming Is A Curse Comments

Rating: 5.0

The day we went to the river
I asked you a question
you replied "yes of course"
the day you gave me the ring, I once gave you
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Geof Lusins
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Annabel Cruz 10 March 2012

I love this! Powerful, raw and vivid! I especially love the last two lines.....a 10 for sure.

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