Dreamland Poem by Toni Brwn

Dreamland

Rating: 5.0


Open up
Let me in
Wake me up
Feel the wind
The wind of love
To carry you
Across the seas
And into love.

One day you’ll feel
The way I do
When I look at you
And know its true.

For now I sleep
In my dream I lay
Hoping to not wake up
And not to walk away
In my dream
You are there
Everyday, for good
Without the slightest hint of tears
Unless they are from lust.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 25 July 2009

great poem done with poetic flow and idea is enough rich and heart feeling one.. what i saw in your poetry, the romantic touches are found much and making your poetry richer.. best of like..and never stop writing..you are doing a good job..

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