Saturday, June 7, 2008

Dreams And Lies Comments

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Before I closed my eyes
laid myself to sleep
you're all I saw
you're all I prayed for
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Nosherwan Khan 07 June 2008

You have given a good difference between dreams & reality.however you have gone in a single direction.Try to give some refernce from the environment&surroundings.The poem is written in good language nevevrtheless.

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