You have given a good difference between dreams & reality.however you have gone in a single direction.Try to give some refernce from the environment&surroundings.The poem is written in good language nevevrtheless.
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You have given a good difference between dreams & reality.however you have gone in a single direction.Try to give some refernce from the environment&surroundings.The poem is written in good language nevevrtheless.