Tuesday, March 8, 2016

Drift Me Off To Sleep Comments

Rating: 5.0

I drive
My hands tremble
The wheel shakes between my sweaty palms and lifeless fingers
Pressure in my head builds
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Brandon McConnell
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Kim Barney 21 March 2016

Wow! This is powerful! Such remorse at a love gone wrong! And you leave the reader wondering if you are going to fall asleep at the wheel! A ten from me.

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