Drive Poem by Patrick O'Reilly

Drive

Rating: 5.0


Take the wheel!
We could drive til the gas tank is bone dry.

Because I don't want to die in this town,
With its gossipy neighbours
And ghostly whispers
And brown weeds stabbing through the sidewalks,
It's forlorn fences
And false, fearful lovers.

The watertower on the hill
Stands like a grave marker,
A shadowy steel sentinel against the gloomy sky.

Take the wheel!
Drive fast and hard against the night,
Do not go gentle.
Steal away from this slow death, crushing weight.
And if, by chance, we crash and burn
I'll hold your hand and remind you
It's better to burn quickly
Than to ever go quietly.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eden Sheffroth 12 April 2006

PATTIE I LOVE YOU! ! ! lol now that we got that outta the way I must say this poem is interesting...anytime ya wanna go on a ride just give me a call lol I'm always up fer an adventure! ! Excellent poem buddy keep er up! ! !

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Nick Percowycz 12 April 2006

I live in such a town! Great endidng to this poem! Obey the speed limit. This poem merits a ten

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Poetry Hound 11 April 2006

A nice feel to this piece. I like the 'Take the wheel' exhortations. That feels very original. Regards.

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