Margaret Moran

Drop In Temperature - Poem by Margaret Moran

The cold nip today
Speaks for itself the body
Feels the drop as well

Topic(s) of this poem: coldness, feel, senses, sensitivity, weather

Form: Haiku

Poet's Notes about The Poem

The cold nip in the air or sudden chill make us aware of the drop down in the temperature. Our body talks to us as well. We feel the cold!

Comments about Drop In Temperature by Margaret Moran

  • Brian Mayo (10/31/2015 11:10:00 AM)

    As well as what?
    A little confusing, but that can be a good thing in a haiku.
    The cold speaks for itself, but the body feels it too- -
    Meaning the cold has affected everything visible (frost, etc) , but also the bones...maybe?
    Is that close?
    I like your haiku. I think it works.
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 31, 2015

Poem Edited: Saturday, October 31, 2015

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