sometime in your life that drown in water
the way you do I know they said everything
for a reason the lowing point in your heart
it does matter how your feel in life were you need
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Sabrina, some awfully weird syntax and diction here. Maybe stop writing for a while and READ lots of good contemporary poetry (Mary Oliver, etc.) You're bound to improve.
If you have time, check out my new website:
jeffersoncarterverse.com
Tell me how you like it. Yrs, JC
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Sabrina, some awfully weird syntax and diction here. Maybe stop writing for a while and READ lots of good contemporary poetry (Mary Oliver, etc.) You're bound to improve. If you have time, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Tell me how you like it. Yrs, JC