Tuesday, November 12, 2013

Drowning Comments

Rating: 5.0

I keep imagining he and I.
Alone, in a cabin.
It’s early May, unseasonably warm,
And a spring rain beats down on the roof.
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Michelle Firth
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Khairul Ahsan 12 November 2013

This poem is so much filled with intense feelings of love! The note is so beautiful too! Gave it 10/10. Loved the imagery drawn in the first stanza. Ideal for two souls in love. 'I hold his armband to my face Because it smells like him and it brings me comfort' These feelings are so real, beautifully expressed. 'Drowning in his memory Until he throws me a lifeline and brings me back to the surface.' Hoping that happens pretty soon!

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