Drowning Poem by Penni Currie

Drowning

Rating: 2.5


The white foam
rushes in

Sprays up

falls back

ebbs and dies

It is warm
so warm

and I am wet

I'm drowning
in emotion

It sprays again

I flinch
but lie here still

cover me
take me

Take me
'till I die

05/1988

Saturday, March 4, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
***** ********* 04 March 2006

I like this descriptive poem about love very much indeed. It has a complete feel to it, I like the warmth too. 9 from Tai

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