Drowning Comments

But you would gladly die tonight From drowning in my love The writing reminds me the climax of Browning's 'Last Ride Together'. I am telling about the climax, not the total poem. Your spirit of this writing is certainely different from that. But you have won the game of catching the readers heart. Utterance of three words can change the whole existence of an individual. Yes, climax related with that moment of uttering. But your hypothetical and projected catastrophe is beautiful. Better she can die...Fantastic poet. My choice is high here. Thank you. 10

Intensity of love and an articulate impression about fall in love. This is a poem made by passion. Excellent and keep writing.