Wednesday, October 26, 2011

Drowning Comments

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Water drops all around me, forming an infinite ocean.
Each dropp is a fear, a scar, an ache, my heart torn wide open.
Each fake smile is a gasp for air; a desperate and pitiful attempt to survive.
How can I move on? How can I forget? This can’t be my life.
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Shelby Carlton
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Vipins Puthooran 26 October 2011

An emotional poem, a sailing ship with pain in its deck drowning to a sea of despair, but follow the direction of life's compass and moor your life in a stable rock, , Good write!

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