Dwarf Planet Poem by joe acacia

Dwarf Planet

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I remember.
There was a that time
When She was still happy in a field of stars.
In a happy time line,
She was clear in the telescope.
But She faded from his sight.

I remember.
The time when She smiled at him
And wished there was a river
Where She could swim back to him.
But the river of stars was too vague
That it felt like with no end.

I remember.
The time when Her memories
Were like a ring of asteroids
At the heart of the solar system
That orbit his mind.
She was never gone.
But just lost in the universe.
Unseen in the telescope.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
the poem is an inspiration from the dwarf planets precisely Pluto that was no longer seen as the nineth planet in the solar system. PLUTO in this poem is used as a metaphor to describe a loved one who is no longer there but was once there. and still in the memories of the person who love ''HER''. can be applied to anyone!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Timber Koleden 19 October 2025

My my! Pure poetic gold here! I have always loved both astronomy and love poems so this poem resonates closely with me! Thank you for sharing this! A beautifully conveyed message, full of goodness and love!

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