Thursday, February 21, 2008

Dying Half Comments

Rating: 4.3

My lonely star
my shallow mortal
and my treasuring friend
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Talia Felix
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Afzal Shauq 14 August 2009

Love has gotten in the way and sometimes it does left u empty all the time and everyday My sister and my only love How change has scared me and made me dream up above sure when someone is incomplete and looking for his /her second missing half to get and to be completed will think like that..and how you sweetly expressed the idea for painful half is really wonderful and heartfelt..inspired from this poem..liked it very much..well done

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 22 April 2008

its very nostalgic as well as tragic..................

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Vidyadhar ... 29 February 2008

A nice peice of work...........

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