Tuesday, August 25, 2009

Early Works - She’s Gone Away Comments

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With trembling lips, she said goodbye
left me alone to cry
the old north wind blew at the door
to chill my heart for evermore.
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 25 August 2009

Poignant Write, David...Stanzaic movement flows like silk off satin....Solid Penning! FjR

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Allenika ... 25 August 2009

so sad and emotional. 'turned her back on a heart that cared..' - i like this phrase. very nice poetry.

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David Harris

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