Editor... Poem by timara kinchion

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reborn, or go back, to face my fears of reality...dont hold back go for it....dont make it easy for hem to attack...dont regret the mistakes that i have made...just learn from them and you will be okae..just thinking about if i had a chance to erase the things i did wrong..someday then i will be okae..

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Timara Kinchion 20 September 2012

uhm..idc about how i write my poems ok..im not a professional...so thats not what matters to me write now..im just tryna get my feelings out...kk so thank yu..

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Adeline Foster 07 September 2012

Dear girl, you do have the chance to redeem yourself by correcting this work. First of all. You must capitalize and you must write in lines so as to move your reader. Chop them up, or we will be lost and forget you. Drop this into Word and it will tell you the spelling mistakes so you can change them, then copy and paste back here. That's the trick. Adeline

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