Monday, March 26, 2012

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Oh woe to the day and to all who are in it.My life was held in captivity.Rope tied violently around my brused and cut wrist.Everyday suffered a painful and deadly threat.Writhe because of unending pain.My whole entire body jerked as if in a middle of a fit, it felt like volts electrifying your inner cells.

Bandaged from head to toe all the faces looked vaacant and immaculate.Vengence was written all over their faces.
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Romina SawardClarke
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Jonathan Maldonado 31 March 2012

This is a pretty haunting poem i like it really good job applying a sense of imagery in your words

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