Wednesday, February 26, 2014

Empty And Ajar Comments

Rating: 5.0

A burning hole above my chest,
Is black and shallow,
In the shape of a lovers hand,
That left a mark as an open scar.
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Cheyenne Rhon
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Donnie Wolff 26 February 2014

This is really good. Intelligent wording and has a distinct feel to the reader.

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