Empty Room Poem by Constantinos Grigoriadis

Empty Room

Rating: 4.8


Hello loneliness, my friend,
I want to speak with you again.

Please let me see her shadow
Let me hear her voice
Let me feel her touch

Feed me to my dream when I close my eyes
The darkness wants me back.

Let me carry her odor to my existence,
Let me burn within her warm.

Fly me to the skies after I will sleep
The morning star wants me back.

Let me close my midnight eyes forevermore,
Let me carry her shape to eternity.

Feed me to my dream
Take me back where I belong.

An empty room without you
Leaves me empty in my soul.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
William Jackson 02 January 2008

You have written a fine poem. I know the emptyness one feels to lose the love of one[s life. Your poem expresses that hollowness that emptyness after death that cannot be filled and makes me think of these lines of Robert Desnos in his ' Poem for the Mysterious Woman' ....I have dreamt so much of you walked so much, talked, slept with your ghost that there only remains to me perhaps, for all that, to be ghost amongst the ghosts & shadow a hundred times more than the shadow which walks & will walk gaily on the sundial of your life....

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