Empty Walls. Poem by Brian Price

Empty Walls.

Rating: 4.5


well this is one of my first....

i live behind empty walls..
theres no windows theres no doors its just me sitting alone......
where no one cares...
where no one believes in me....
where everyone hates me...
where i just cant be in peace....
where behind these empty walls....
theres no light there is nothing.....
behind these walls theres nothing to believe in.....
behind these empty walls there is no happiness only sorrow...
where your heart cannot care for anything......
where love has no use......
where there is nothing but torment....
but behind these walls i find hope...
hope someone will figure out how to break these empty walls......
so i sit and wait patiently....
while i wait for someone to break...
these empty walls.....
and just believe in my life my future.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Costa Anakiev 15 April 2009

Well Brian, it's a very serious well written work. If you want to smile, read my 'Empty walls'. Konstantin.

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Sid John Gardner. 08 March 2009

Theres another world on the other side...Nothing is forever.Courage Mon Brave, Sid

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