Thursday, October 2, 2014

End Of Everything Comments

Rating: 4.5

Tried to keep my head above the water
Yet the water keeps on rising till it reaches the top
Tried to hold on for as long as I could
But my grip is failing
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Dr Pintu Mahakul 02 October 2014

But it will soon be over, Beautifully written this poem. End is definite and everything comes newly in life. Nice job.

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