Wednesday, July 6, 2011

End The Pain Comments

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God please help me end this pain.
I hurt so deeply I can't sustain.
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Stacy L Denton
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 06 July 2011

It was really a great poem in the form of a prayer. A little pessimistic yet interesting. You have done a great job. Well done. Keep on writing. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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