Saturday, April 26, 2014

Errant Lines Comments

Rating: 4.5

Listening
in bed,
with wife beside me,
to the strange whistle
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Bill Grace
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Khairul Ahsan 26 April 2014

The eye catching title of the poem drew me to it, I was absolutely mesmerized as I went through. Oh, what a beautiful poem this is! 'These are errant lines written but not even for a reader.' - If a reader reads these 'errant' lines, he would certainly look for your other 'errant' works. A magnificent poem, well written. I've read your biography. Amazed to see with how much care you've so elaborately constructed it. This too is well written.

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