Wednesday, August 26, 2009

Eternal Life Comments

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Smothered, the illusion manufactured
By a world of words, crackled into flame
On crumpled paper, scattering fractured
Fantasies, blackened by my dawn to shame.
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Peter Eliastam
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Sarvesh Kulkarni 27 August 2009

wonderful poem....deep....with amazing imagery.... finely crafted. thank you,

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